Posts Tagged ‘writing’
Analyzing and Honoring Writing at Sandhills Elem in Swansea, SC
Wednesday, March 11th, 2009See how the teachers at Sandhills Elementary honor writing and analyze books. (more…)
The Dynamic Nonfiction Classroom: a Visit to Indian Hill Elementary in Ohio
Wednesday, February 18th, 2009It is going to take me quite a while to process all the great teaching techniques I witnessed at Indian Hill Elementary and Indian Hill Primary, two schools in Cincinnati. Just look at what Mrs. Bauer and her class were doing with nonfiction. This is a classroom full of words. You can see their process on the walls. (more…)
Hush Little Puppy Activities
Sunday, December 14th, 2008These are from Hamilton Traditional School in Indiana.
- Hush Little Puppy Activity
- Hush Little Puppy Rhyme Study
- Recording rhyming words
Language fun with Crocodile Listens and the chant books
Sunday, December 14th, 2008This amazing teacher worked with her students to put together a Thanksgiving-appropriate story using the structure of Crocodile Listens. See what happens when turkey listens!
They also created a turkey chant using the chant books as a structural element. Mrs Schwartz is clearly an extraordinary teacher.
- These are actually breeds of turkeys, apparently.
- The students map out sounds a turkey might hear
- They set the story when the pilgrims arrived!
- They imagine what the turkey heard!
- Onomatopoeia comes into play.
- Creating the stories touches many kinds of descriptive writing.
- This writing is early elementary. Wow!
6+ Traits of Writing: Sayre’s Books as Models
Wednesday, September 10th, 2008| Sayre’s Books As Models For Teaching The 6 + Traits of Writing |
| Ideas | (details, development, focus) | Trout Are Made of Trees
Stars Beneath Your Bed: the Surprising Story of Dust Secrets of Sound: Studying the Calls of Whales, Elephants, and Birds Ocean, Coral Reef, and other in the “Exploring Earth’s Biomes” series |
| Organization | (internal structure) | Vulture View
Trout Are Made of Trees Home At Last: a Song of Migration Secrets of Sound: Studying the Calls of Whales, Elephants, and Birds Ocean, Coral Reef, and other in the “Exploring Earth’s Biomes” series |
| Voice | (tone, style, purpose, audience) | Trout Are Made of Trees
The Bumblebee Queen If You Should Hear a Honey Guide Army Ant Parade Dig, Wait, Listen: a Desert Toad’s Tale |
| Word Choice | (precise language and phrasing) | Vulture View
The Bumblebee Queen Stars Beneath Your Bed Dig, Wait, Listen: a Desert Toad’s Tale Shadows Secrets of Sound: Studying the Calls of Whales, Elephants, and Birds |
| Sentence Fluency | (rhythm, cadence) | Vulture View
Bird, Bird, Bird: a Chirping Chant Home At Last: a Song of Migration Trout, Trout, Trout: a Fish Chant Ant, Ant, Ant: An Insect Chant Shadows |
| Conventions | (mechanical correctness) | any |
| Presentation | (handwriting, formatting, layout) | The Bumblebee QueenTrout, Trout, Trout: a Fish Chant
One Is a Snail, Ten Is a Crab (Great for pagination.) |
Turtle, Turtle, Watch Out! Activities
Friday, September 5th, 2008- Lawrenceburg, NY music teacher worked with her students to compose music to the book tex
- Their music for Turtle, Turtle
- Studying problem/solution patterns using book as source
- Riddles…a great way to get young writers engaged
- Using the book as a model for their own animal stories
- paper plate sea turtles in IN
Splish, Splash, Animal Baths Roundup
Thursday, September 4th, 2008Baths are a favorite writing topic for guided essays because most kids have had experience with them. See what clever teachers and students did with art related to my animal baths book.
- Harrison School
Bumblebee Queen activities
Tuesday, August 5th, 2008School Visit Activities
- Writing in response to reading book
- Writing added to art
- Cupcake flowers and bumblebee facts
- Knox County, OH students write about bees
- Daniel Write Elementary Dublin, OH
- The paper also comes in green…others made frogs.

















































